Think about how one holiday differs from another holiday.Pick one aspect of holidays in general (food, decorations, activities, gifts, reason for the holiday, colors, etc.) and write one paragraph contrasting (showing the differences between) the two holidays. Remember to focus on just one aspect.
1. Do indent the beginning of a paragraph.
2. Write the paragraph as if the reader has never seen the prompt or title.
Include necessary specific information in your central idea sentence.
For instance, if your paragraph is comparing Christmas dinner at your home with Thanksgiving dinner at your home,
Don’t say
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Do say something like
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"Christmas dinner is always better."
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"Christmas dinner at my home is always better than our Thanksgiving dinner."
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Your reader needs to know whose Christmas dinner you are talking about and what you are comparing it to. Your central idea needs to contain the subject/topic of your paragraph and a statement about it.
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3. Do not start out telling your reader that you are going to tell them something.
Don’t say
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Do say something like
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I'm going to tell you why Christmas dinner at my house is better than our Thanksgiving dinner. (or)
Today I'm going to write about the differences between Thanksgiving dinner and Christmas dinner. (or)
I think that Christmas dinner at my house is better than our Thanksgiving dinner.
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"Christmas dinner at my home is always better than our Thanksgiving dinner."
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You do not have to tell your reader that this is what you are writing about or that this is what you think. They know that because you have written it.
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Let's switch to a new subject instead of holiday dinners, and continue giving more hints for a great paragraph!
4. Present at least three pieces of evidence to support your central idea.
5. Use transitions to guide your reader through your ideas.
6. Do not wander from the topic of your central idea. Keep all information focused on supporting that central idea.
7. End with a concluding sentence that brings the paragraph to a smooth close.
8. Edit carefully.
a. Is every sentence a complete sentence with a subject and predicate? Is it capitalized at the beginning and does it end with appropriate punctuation?
b. Are other words capitalized that need to be such as proper nouns and titles?
Have I avoided capitalizing words or letters that should not be capitalized?
c. Are all words spelled correctly?
d. Have I used commas correctly?
9. Make your style fit your audience and purpose.
a. Have I avoided any crude or slang words or phrases?
b. Have I avoided being overly conversational?
c. Have I avoided contractions and abbreviations?
d. Have I avoided cliche (overused) phrases and sentences?
Words that are Overly Used and Too Informal
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tons (as in "There were tons of people there.")
well (used as an interjection as in "Well, this is what I think.") etc. (Do you really need to say that there are more items you are not listing? If you must use it, spell it out as "et cetera.") way (as in "it was way different") like (I was like 'Wow, that was cool." |
Also avoid
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text talk: LOL and so on
the ampersand: & or however you write it when you are handwriting. Do not use it. Write out "and." |
Sample paragraph