Tuesday, January 15, 2013

Corrections for "Splash Mountain"

The Time We Went to Splash Mountain

            We drove to California and went to Disneyland.  We got 

our tickets and went in.  We got on Splash Mountain.  I felt 

nervous. When the ride started up,   I got really nervous.  I

could  hear people screaming.   I was really, really, really (or omit the "reallys")

scared, but  soon it was over.   I felt closer to my dad because

of that.  After that we went and ate hamburgers.   I ate a lot

of fries too.   I will never forget that trip!