Tuesday, November 11, 2014

Wednesday/Thursday, November 12/13, 2014



If you were absent, study the conjunctions and transitions, and complete the subordinating conjunction activity.   Get the tape in and tape it into your composition book.  Make sure to look at the sample Who's Who! 


                              


1.  Individual Reading Time   

(A1) or finishing  your packet 

with the article and story about outer space

http://www.nasa.gov/content/greg-olsen-soyuz-spaceflight-participant/#.VGTOeVfF_u4


An example of a Who's Who External Text Feature:  

A Who's Who for the Ross Sea Party


Your projects are due on November 24 (B-Day)/ November 25 (A-Day).

If you need to complete make-up work for the External Text Features Scavenger Hunt or for the assignment that asked you to find External Text Features in book, come to CaveTime on Friday. 





Today is ALL ABOUT RELATIONSHIPS.

Relationships Within the Classroom

 Relationships Among the Sentences and Sentence Parts

Relationships Among Sentences and Among Paragraphs (Parts of Essays)




2.  Selecting Our Class Dispositions.  

 “A successful classroom is about relationships 
– about how we are together.”


dis·po·si·tion
ˌdispəˈziSH(ə)n/
noun
  1. 1.
    a person's inherent qualities of mind and character.
    "a sweet-natured girl of a placid disposition"
    synonyms:temperamentnaturecharacterconstitutionmakeupmentality
    "a nervous disposition"

Today we are working on creating a  constitution for the classes that meet in this room, selecting the qualities we feel are most important to a successful classroom.   In a couple of days, all of the English classes will vote on the qualities that will become the standard in this room.  

B5

Max
Aaron
Ameri
Hallie




C.J.
Jared
Marley
Madison

Elexus
Richard
Katelyn
Dylan

Kassidy
Fernando
Katie H.
Kyle

Mason W
Brent
Damon
Caden

Paxton
Morgan
Victor
Connor


Mia
Channing
Mercedes
Mason R


Tanner
Kenji
Abe
Taylor


B6 

Colby
Blake
Lindsay
Alaina




Andrew
KeliAnn
Luke
Kenah

Jaxon
Ryan
Kaitlyn
Quinci

Brayden
Myah
Allyson
Jacob W

Maddie
Justin
Ivan
Samantha

Cameron
Diego
Emily L
Suzanne

Gabriel
Alysa
Emily R
Brady K.

Ryan L
Brady L
Coby L
Landon B

B7

Josh  B
Dallin
Joseph
Dallin




Ashley
Kristen
Eoin
Joshua W

Victor
Heston
Isabelle
Cianne
Jeremy


Emily C
Melanie
Taj
Jayce



Hayden St
Hunter
Daniel
Damien

Jace
Hayden Sm
Sarah
Jenna



A1 -      Whom did I leave off? 

Mariah
Dallon
Emma B
Cameron




Jordan
Mary
James M
Ixtlaly


Faith
Noelle
Jaxon
Teigun


Jayde
Amber
James B
Ryder W

Kaitlyn
Alan
Karina
Grayson

Joseph
Anabella
Camille
Ryan

Audrey
McKell
Hailey
Emma

Breanna
Ceirra
Zoe

Kylie
Matia
Heaven




A.  In your composition book, list ways that class members could think and behave that would make this classroom a good place to be.
          You may have already done this at the beginning of the year.  If so, find your list, and perhaps change it or add to it. 









B.  Receive the illustrated page for Civic Dispositions.
C.  Match them with the items you already have. 
D.  Can you think of any that are left off the handout? 









E.  In groups of four or five, come to a consensus, selecting the five dispositions you think are the most important in the classroom. 
Be prepared to share out the dispositions you selected in ___7___ minutes.  

Group Work: 
 Involver:  makes sure everyone participates   THE OLDEST
 Recorder:  writes down what the group decides  NEXT OLDEST
 Speaker:  announces to the class, when called on, the five dispositions your group has selected   YOUNGEST
  Participants:  Everyone participates! 

Group Rules:
  •   Everyone participates.
  •   We take turns naturally.  
  •   Everyone speaks, and everyone listens to the one speaking.
  •   We do not interact with other groups during our group discussion time. 
  •   We think through the topic together.  We reason with each other. 
  •   No one person does all the work, and everyone pulls their weight.    


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Rearrange chairs.  



Practically Perfect Paragraphs and Essays
For a successful paragraph you must have:
For a successful essay you must have:
An interesting central idea (topic sentence)



An interesting introductory paragraph with a topic sentence (central idea) for the whole essay
Supporting details sentences that all fit “into” the central idea 
Body paragraphs that all support the central idea -- Each will cover a major supporting detail about the central idea, and will include support for each of those major ideas.
An effective conclusion
An effective concluding paragraph
Transitions that guide the reader from one idea to the next, showing how the ideas are related.
Transitions that guide the reader from one idea to the next, showing how the ideas are related. Transitions are especially important between paragraphs.
Formal language  

Formal Language
A variety of sentence types and lengths
A variety of sentence types and lengths
Careful editing for conventions
Careful editing for conventions

Add: Cite sources used.                        Add:  Cite sources used.

When do I need to cite a source?  If you did not know the information before you read the source, cit the source!

_____________

3.   AAAWWEUBBIS's and Transitions 

                        Relationships Among the Sentences and Sentence Parts


Is there a difference?

1. Because Suzie liked James, she baked him a pie.

2. Although Suzie liked James, she baked him a pie.

3. Since Suzie baked him a pie, James liked her.

4. In spite of the fact that Suzie baked him a pie, James liked her. 

5. Before Suzie baked him a pie, James liked her.

6. After Suzie baked him a pie, James liked her. 




Conjunctions


 Subordinating Conjunctions Activity (A1 did not do this activity.)

Subordinating conjunctions have two main jobs:  to show relationships (transition) among parts and to reduce the importance of one clause so that a reader understands which of the two ideas is more important.
You are writing COMPLEX sentences!

Another Explanation of Subordinating Conjunctions

Relationships Among Sentences and Among Paragraphs (Parts of Essays)

Speed Grammar  (All classes did this activity.)





Speed Grammar:  Transitions 
In your conversation, in every sentence you must use the transition you are given.

Topics:

job-shadowing

Thanksgiving Break

this weekend

television or movies

food

chores/work you have to do at home

sports

living in American Fork

my family






If you were absent, study the conjunctions and transitions, and complete the subordinating conjunction activity.   Get the tape in and tape it into your composition book.   Make sure to look at the sample Who's Who!