Saturday, February 1, 2014

Sentence Errors

There are three problems with sentences we'd like to make you aware of today.
They are
Fragments
Run-Ons and
Comma Splices

Fragments


A complete sentence must have a subject and a verb and must express a complete thought. 

More Fragments
Because you are such delightful students, . . . . . . . . .


After you have finished writing your essay, . . . . . . . 


Although there is a raging mad bull elephant in the hallway, . . . . 

To repair a fragment, you need to add words or combine it with a complete sentence nearby. 


Run-On Sentences



Tom read the novel his friend saw the movie.
I am sleepy I have to stay awake in Ms. Dorsey's class. 
[Two or more sentences are shoved together with 
nothing in between them.]
To repair them, you could add a period and capitalization.
To repair them, you could use a semicolon  between the two complete thoughts.
To repair them, you could use a comma plus a conjunction. 


Comma Splices
[Two or more sentences are shoved together with 
nothing in between them but a comma.  A comma is not strong enough on its own to join two complete sentence. ]
To repair them, you could add a period and capitalization.

                             To repair them, you could use a semicolon to replace the comma.

               To repair them, you could replace the lone comma with a comma plus a conjunction.