Monday, February 27, 2017

Sample Draft for Exploring Oceans with Technology



Draft: 

      Adventurers who want to go “where no one has gone before” do not need to travel to outer space.  According to “Oceans: Earth’s Final Frontier,” ninety five percent of earth’s oceans have not yet been explored.  Under the ocean there are mountain ranges, volcanoes,  and seven-mile-deep valleys. There are strange creatures, some huge, some small but still frightening.   The problem has been that like outer space, the ocean is a hostile environment to man.  So men have needed to come up with technology before they can explore these places on our own planet where no one has been able to go before.

     As much as explorers wanted to dive deep into the oceans, they couldn’t because of the “extreme darkness, freezing cold temperatures, and crushing water pressures” (DiveTechnology).   And of course there is the obvious problem of breathing under water. 
The famous Jacques Cousteau helped invent the breathing apparatus that later became known as SCUBA gear, but even with this, divers couldn’t go any further than 130 feet (DiveTechnology).  There were still the problems of cold and fatal water pressure.   As the space program brought new inventions, a diving suit was based on space suits.  It included a breathing apparatus and added to that protection from water pressure and extreme temperatures.  The new Jim Suit, as it was called, allowed divers to descend to 1,250 feet (DiveTechnology). 


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     To travel deeper, it took a submarine where the diver could be protected and have air and visibility, but even those small subs had their depth limits.  Before 2012 four miles below the surface was the deepest the small deep diving submarines could go.  Then along came James Cameron, the filmmaker and deep sea explorer.   He invented The Deepsea Challenger, and with it was able to explore the bottom of the Mariana Trench – seven miles down and the deepest known place on earth (Lights, Camera, Inventor).   As mankind continues to develop new technology, perhaps more of us will explore these places we have not been able to go before, and who knows what we will discover.