And standing in the middle of the opening was a hulking, terrifying figure.
Deltora Quest: Forests of Silence by Emily Rodda, p. 113
Lief and Barda froze as the hollow, echoing voice rang out.
Deltora Quest: Forests of Silence by Emily Rodda, p. 113
Overjoyed, Lief saw that ideed the wound was repairing itself. Already, it was just a raw, red scar. And as he watched the scar itself began to fade, till it was nothing but a thin white line.
Deltora Quest: Forests of Silence by Emily Rodda, p. 125
. . . the last few golden drops dripped into it.
Deltora Quest: Forests of Silence by Emily Rodda, p. 126
How can I tell whether to add the comma?
- Can you reverse the order of the adjectives -- and it still sounds right?
- Can you replace the comma with "and" -- and it still sounds right?
