Tuesday, July 21, 2015

Friday, July 17, 2015

Revision


Notice:  We don't make you write in cement!  You can change what you write to make it even better!

Prewriting Exercises


Prewriting Techniques:
Video about gather ideas --  take notes -- what she says/my responses

Six Traits:  IDEAS

Creative Writing --

1) freewriting

2) focused freewriting

3) brainstorming

4) clustering

5) questioning
Who? What? Where? When? Why? How?

6) keeping a journal

7) observing
        watching
        listening

8) reading with a focus =
preview, skim, take notes

9) listening with a focus =
seek background info, create list of info needed, take notes

10) imagining

11) gathering
quotes, ideas, etc.









Prewriting Techniques:

1) freewriting       

2) focused freewriting     friendship, highway, child
3) brainstorming             a place I enjoy  or a place I don’t like

4) clustering                   heroes, movies, holidays, dreams

Spidering -- plot -- problem   -- lost, jungle 
                                                  --  

5) questioning                  sports,   -- focus on one sport but let yourself expand
Who?                                     players -- baseball, basketball, soccer, etc.  fans 
What?                                    excitement, stadium on day of game, tailgate parties, foods, TV, uniforms,                                    
 Where?                                     stadiums, school playing fields, back lots,
When?                                    times to practice, time to watch, time to arrive for game, game over
 Why?                                     social, emotional, physical outlet
How?                                             getting to play, getting to see the games

       What do I know?  What would I like to know?  Where can I get more information?  What would I like to focus on?  What is my point of view?  Who is my audience?     -- drug addiction


6) keeping a journal     self, assigned    goals, dreams, steps,    problems    analyze self, situation, describe people,  If I could. . . then. . . ,   secrets,    people you admire or are supposed to admire    places to visit    considering things you’ve learned    news     facts   (the average young American witnesses 18,000 TV murders before he or she graduates from high school)

Hunter in So Yesterday  (discuss)

7) observing


8) reading with a focus =
preview, skim, take notes

9) listening with a focus =  (interview a classmate)
seek background info, create list of info needed, take notes
interviewing --  questions 
Practice: Your favorite place to be -- where would you go? A specific place you know. (take notes on where, why, description
What's unique about you?

If you had $5, $100, a million? 

Tritina Example

Tritina
 Example

Early Evening Tritina
Stanza 1
The sun was low in the sky. We were going to watch for deer. (1)
It would be dark soon. (2)
We had only a little time, but I was with you. (3)

Stanza 2 
I climbed the ladder of your tree stand and glanced down at the pond. You (3)
followed and said, "We might not see a deer." (1)
I nodded.  "But if we're going to, it will be soon. (2)

Stanza 3
Your words were magic.  Soon  (2)
was an understatement.  I gazed down at the clover-covered field.  So did you. (3)
As if on due, out of the woods stepped two majestic deer. (1)

Envoy
They ate and left, too soon. (2)  That evening, you (3) gave me a miracle in the shape of

      the deer. (1)

Sportsmanship Quotes


Sportsmanship Quotes


It's not about winning or losing. It's about playing your best.
-- submitted by Jacinta Crook

One man practicing sportsmanship is better than a hundred teaching it.
- Knute Rockne

Sports do not build character. They reveal it.
-- John Wooden

Sports should always be fun.
-- Charles Mann

Self-Discipline -- Quotes




Elie Wiesel: Quotes on Self Discipline
Ultimately, the only power to which man should aspire is that which he exercises over himself.

Jim Rohn: Quotes on Self Discipline
Unless you change how you are, you will always have what you've got.

Jesse Owens: Quotes on Self Discipline
We all have dreams. But in order to make dreams into reality, it takes an awful lot of determination, dedication, self-discipline, and effort.

Jim Rohn: Quotes on Self Discipline
We can have more than we've got because we can become more than we are.

Jim Rohn: Quotes on Self Discipline
We must all suffer one of two things: the pain of discipline or the pain of regret or disappointment.


Disciplining yourself to do what you know is right and importance, although difficult, is the highroad to pride, self-esteem, and personal satisfaction.          Brian Tracy          American Trainer, Speaker, Author, Businessman


If you do not conquer self, you will be conquered by self.          
Napoleon Hill          1883-1970, American Speaker, Motivational Writer, ''Think and Grow Rich''

The first and the best victory is to conquer self.          
Plato          BC 427?-347?, Greek Philosopher

Self-respect is the root of DISCIPLINE; the sense of dignity grows with the ability to say no to oneself.         
Abraham J. Heschel          1907-1972, Polish educator, Author

The greatest blessing of our democracy is freedom. But in the last analysis, our only freedom is the freedom to DISCIPLINE ourselves.       
  Bernard M. Baruch          1870-1965, American Financier

One of the great lessons I've learned in athletics is that you've got to DISCIPLINE your life. No matter how good you may be, you've got to be willing to cut out of your life those things that keep you from going to the top.        
Bob Richards          American Olympic Pole Vaulting Champion


The only DISCIPLINE that lasts is self DISCIPLINE.        
O.A.  "Bum" Phillips          American Football Coach

Seek freedom and become captive of your desires. Seek DISCIPLINE and find your liberty.         Frank Herbert          1920-1986, American Writer

By constant self-DISCIPLINE and self-control you can develop greatness of character.         
Grenville Kleiser          1868-1953, American Author


What we do upon some great occasion will probably depend on what we already are. What we are will be the result of previous years of self-DISCIPLINE.        
Henry Parry Liddon          1829-1890, British Theologian

He who lives without DISCIPLINE dies without honour.        
Icelandic Proverb          Sayings of Icelandic Origin


For every DISCIPLINEd effort there is a multiple reward.         
Jim Rohn          American Businessman, Author, Speaker, Philosopher


The DISCIPLINE of desire is the background of character.        
John Locke          1632-1704, British Philosopher


Some people regard DISCIPLINE as a chore. For me, it is a kind of order that sets me free to fly.        
Julie Andrews          1935-, British Singer, Actress


Without DISCIPLINE, there is no life at all.         
Katharine Hepburn          1907-, American Actress, Writer


The DISCIPLINE of writing something down is the first step toward making it happen.         
Lee Iacocca          1924-, American Businessman, Former CEO of Chrysler


Self-DISCIPLINEd begins with the mastery of your thoughts. If you don't control what you think, you can't control what you do. Simply, self-DISCIPLINE enables you to think first and act afterward.         
Napoleon Hill          1883-1970, American Speaker, Motivational Writer, ''Think and Grow Rich''


DISCIPLINE is the refining fire by which talent becomes ability.         
Roy L. Smith          American Clergyman


Self discipline is when your conscience tells you to do something and you don't talk back.         W. K. Hope



If we do not DISCIPLINE ourselves the world will do it for us.         
William Feather          1888-18, American Writer, Businessman


Conflict





Conflict -- What are the types of conflict we talk about in literature?
This teacher provides a great discussion of the importance of conflict, and of the difference between internal and external conflict:http://www.dowlingcentral.com/MrsD/area/literature/Terms/conflict.html
See if you can answer the questions in the quiz, but you don't need to send her your score!

The main types of conflict that we study could include
man vs. man Literary example: The Outsiders
man vs. nature Literary example: Hatchet
man vs. society Literary example: Among the Hidden
man vs. the unknown (or the supernatural) Literary Example:Dracula, Frankenstein, War of the Worlds. The Odyssey
man vs. technology Literary example: parts of 2001: A Space Odyssey
man vs. himself Literary example: Words By Heart (deciding whether to forgive)