Friday, October 7, 2011

Model Paragraphs for Starburst/Jolly Rancher Contrast

These were written by students on November 4, 2011:
I have corrected some minor editing errors.

Caitlyn K. wrote
    Candies like Jolly Ranchers and Starbursts are [both] sweet, but they are different in multiple ways.  First, Jolly Ranchers are hard and Starbursts are chewy.  Second, Jolly Ranchers are shaped like a cylinder, and Starbursts are shaped like a cube.  Last, Jolly Ranchers are more sour than sweet, and Starbursts are more sweet than sour.  Even though these candies have a different taste, [shape], and texture, they still bring you happiness and life.