Tuesday, October 2, 2012

October 3/4, 2012

iRead:  Individual Reading for about 5 minutes.

iListen and Read:  We listened to The Outsiders for a few minutes.



iWrite Right (iSpell Right)
lead/lead/led        lead led posters.pptx
Expect a quiz next time on the confused words sets we've recently reviewed.

iWrite: Comparing and Contrasting 10-3 

Preparing to Write By Using a Graphic Organizer
Take out your composition books and turn to a new page.           
Your heading in your composition book should read: iWrite: Comparing and Contrasting 10-3
--> The past couple of iWrites we’ve written about two different family members. We’re using a tool called a graphic organizer (a Venn Diagram)  to compare and contrast these two family members. 

Paragraph3 Compare Contrast(1).pptx 

--> Draw two large circles in your composition book, with their edges overlapping to form a shape in the middle. Write the name of the first person you described two class periods ago in one circle, and the name of the person you wrote about last time in the second circle. Take a minute and write in the middle section things the people have in common. Under or around their names write things that they don’t have common—that are specific to that individual.  

Write at least five items in each section of your organizer. 

We used the sample topic sentences, pattern, and concluding sentences  on the PowerPoint to begin writing a paragraph comparing and contrasting the two people we'd already written about. 

iListen. Read and Learn:  We listened to and followed along with The Outsiders, filling out the charts for characters, setting, and plot.
 
Listen to/Follow along with The Outsiders
A1 --   Today we read to page  68, beginning chapter 5 ("We Crouched" 9:07).
A3 --   Today we read to page  68, beginning chapter 5 ("We Crouched" 9:07).
A4 --   Today we read to page  68, beginning chapter 5 ("We Crouched" 9:07).
B7 --   Today we read to page 60, (p. 45 -- Track 1 -- 25:00)
B8  --  Today we read to page 75 ("We Crouched" 22:25)


Reminders:
We have extended your opportunity to take the online pretests through this Saturday, October 6.  We will not be doing them in class, but you could do them during cave time. 
 
Your Basic 8, Book 2 Assessment is due by October 16/17. 
Your passages are due by October 9/10. 

Basic 8, Book #2 Assessment -- Character Cube

 You should be reading a contemporary realistic fiction novel. 
 You should already have your book approved by a teacher.
 You should be collecting passages from the book that reveal the character by
  •       What he or she does
  •       What he or she says or thinks
  •       What the narrator or another character says about him or her
For instance,  in The Outsiders today in A1 we read about Ponyboy and Johnny out in the country.
Ponyboy describes Johnny with this passage:
   "He didn't look like any farm boy to me.  He still reminded me of a lost puppy who had been kicked too often, but for the first time I saw him as a stranger might see him.  He looked hard and tough, because of his black T-shirt and his blue jeans and jacket, and because his hair was heavily greased and so long." 

 This passage would go under  "What the narrator or another character says about him or her."
 On my cube, side 6, I would write this description:  LOOKS HARD and TOUGH    INSIDE LIKE A LOST PUPPY   Then I would draw something to go along with that, like a nail (hard as nails), and cute little puppy.  

See also the tab above for Required Reading.

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 Your "final" test on commonly confused words will be on October 16/17.
You will take a quiz that counts on October 5/8.  
It will be on the words that we have focused on already. 
a lot /  allot
desert   /   dessert   /  desert 
break   /  brake
hear   /   here
led  /  lead 


Monday, October 1, 2012

"If I Were in Charge of the World"


You will write an "If I Were in Charge" Poem

Example of an "If I Were in Charge Poem":


IF I WERE IN CHARGE OF THE WORLD

If I were in charge of the world
I’d cancel oatmeal,
Monday mornings,
Allergy shots, and also
Sara Steinberg.

If I were in charge of the world
There’d be brighter night lights,
Healthier hamsters, and
Basketball baskets forty-eight inches lower.

If I were in charge of the world
You wouldn’t have lonely.
You wouldn’t have clean.
You wouldn’t have bedtimes.
Or “Don’t punch your sister.”
You wouldn’t even have sisters.

If I were in charge of the world
A chocolate sundae with whipped cream and nuts
would be a vegetable.
All 007 movies would be G.
And a person who sometimes forgets to brush,
And sometimes forgets to flush,
Would still be allowed to be
In charge of the world.


by Judith Viorst


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Format for an "If I Were In Charge of the World" poem:

IF I WERE IN CHARGE OF THE WORLD

If I were in charge of the world
I’d cancel ____________________________________,
_____________________________________________,
_____________________________________________, and also
_____________________________________________.

If I were in charge of the world
There’d be _______________________________________,
_____________________________________________, and
________________________________________________.

If I were in charge of the world
You wouldn’t have ___________________________________.
You wouldn’t have ___________________________________.
You wouldn’t have ___________________________________.
Or ________________________________________________.
You wouldn’t even have ________________________________.

If I were in charge of the world
__________________________________________________________
would be _____________________________________________.
All ___________________________ would be __________________________.
And a person who _________________________________________________,
And _____________________________________________________________,
Would still be allowed to be
In charge of the world.

to/too/two



http://www.myeducationstuff.com/spelling/too_two_to/two_poster.htm



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http://www.virtualfarm.com/grammar-time-to-too-two-tutu/

Basic 8, Book #2 Assessment -- Character Cube


 
Character Cube

Independent Reading Assignment #2


Show some deeper thinking about a character in your book by looking at him or her in 3-D! You will read a contemporary realistic fiction novel and create a cube displaying representations of a main character from the book on each side.


Selecting Your Book
o   Your book should be near your own reading level (SRI score), so it’s challenging, but not enough to spoil the fun of reading. 
o   It must be a book you haven’t read before. 
o   Select a book you can finish reading within the allotted time.
o   Book selection must be approved by the teacher by September 27.
 


Cube Requirements:
Points
Side 1
Book title, author, # pages; your name and class period
5
Side 2
Setting (place and time period)
10
Side 3
Main character’s name and picture
10
Side 4
What you learn about the character from what he or she says/thinks. (Passage #1) Label this side “#4.”
10
Side 5
What you learn about the character from what the character does (Passage #2) Label this side “#5.”
10
Side 6
What you learn about the character from what narrator/other characters say about the character. (Passage #3) Label this side “#6.”
10
Other:
Overall neatness, accuracy, and effort
5

Completing Your Cube
c  Pencil in your ideas on the template draft attached.
c  Complete a notes page with three passages from the book about your character.
c  Get your draft and notes page checked off by a teacher by October 9.
c  Complete the cube for your book in ink and color on cardstock-weight paper template. Turn into the wire basket FLAT.
c  Write a one-paragraph description of your assignment and what grade you should earn on it on a separate paper.
c  Cut out and tape or glue together neatly sooner or DURING CLASS the day it is due, October 18.

Expectations
c  Your work should reflect thorough knowledge and understanding of your book and your chosen character.
c  Your work should be neat and creative.
c  Correctly capitalize and spell words on your project.



Character Cube Notes Page

Book Title: _________________________________________________________________
Author: ____________________________________________________
Cube Character: __________________________________________

Short passages from the book about your character:
Passage #1: ___________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ from page: ______.
Character says/thinks
Passage #2: ___________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ from page: ______.
Character does
Passage #3: ___________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ from page: ______.
Others say



 Dead Words
Be very specific! Do not use these adjectives on any face of your cubes:
awesome
bad
cool
good
happy
nice



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If you would like to print a hard copy of this assignment and worksheet, go to
Click on the Download tab and open it. 



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Example of collected passages:
Book: Goliath (part of the Leviathan trilogy) by Scott Westerfeld
Character: Alek, the Prince of Austria who is in exile to save his life
Passage 1: the character says/thinks – page 3                                                      Side 4
“It was maddening.  . . . here aboard the Leviathan he was deadweight – a waste of hydrogen, and the crew called anything useless.”
This shows that Alek is feeling useless now. 
Passage 2: the character does  --page 3                                                                Side 5
“Two weeks ago he’d helped lead a revolution against the Ottoman sultan, ruler of an ancient empire. The rebels had welcomed Alek’s counsel, his piloting skills, and his gold.  And together they’d won.”
This proves that Alek could be a leader, and that he had skills (and had used his riches)  to help other people.
Passage 3: another character or the narrator says  -- page 121                             Side 6
[Deryn is a main character in the book, a commoner, a young soldier on the Leviathan, and Alek’s best friend.]
“Typical, Deryn thought, that it took a clever scheme and a Clanker device to lift Alek’s spirits.  But it was good to see the boy happy at last, instead of moping about as if the world had ended.”
This tells me that Alek is moody, and sad much of the time.  Being useful makes him feel better.

 

Here are other collected passages that reveal character in a novel:


The character’s name:   Jason

Don’t forget to include the page numbers where you find the information.
how the character is described by the narrator
p. 7 "jeans and sneakers, a purple T-shirt, and a black windbreaker."
p. 39 there is a tattoo on his arm -- "a dozen straight lines like a bar code, and over than an eagle with the letters SPQR."

how the character is described by other characters
Piper describe him: p. 33 "Jason stood right next to her: those sky blue eyes, close-cropped blond hair, that cute little scar on his upper lip.  His face was kind and gentle, but always a little sad."
p. 7 Leo: "We go to the 'Wilderness School" . . . Which means we're "bad kids".. . .
p. 15 Coach Hedge: "You've got a powerful way with the mist, kid.. . . You smell like a half-blood."
p. 21 Dylan: "I'm glad I waited, demigod. . . . my mistress said a third was coming -- someone special. . . "
p. 33 Annabeth: "You seem to know a lot, Jason."
p. 45 Annabeth, describing all of the demigods: ". . . we're hard-wired for battle. Restless, impulsive, we don't fit in with regular kids."
p. 49 Piper thinks of Jason (at least the way she thinks it was) : "He was so nice to her and so patient, he could even put up with hyperactive Leo. . . He's accepted her for herself and didn't judge her. . . "
what the character does
p. 23  He pulls out the coin and suddenly it becomes a sword.
p. 25 . . . his instincts won. . . He ran to the railing and jumped over the side. floating in midair a hundred feet above the river. . . .27 Jason thought Up, and instantly they shot skyward.
p. 33 "He just stared at the horizon, not even noticing her."

what the character says and how he or she says it
p. 7 "I don't know who I am."
p. 30 "I'm not going anywhere with her. . . . She looks like she wants to kill me." (referring to Annabeth)


what the character thinks
p. 3 [kids on the bus] "all looked around his age. . . fifteen? Sixteen? Okay, that was scary.  He didn't know his own age."
p. 4 "He was sure the coach knew he didn't belong there."
p. 9 about Dylan: "Jason hated him instantly."
p. 9 about Leo: "Jason figured that if this was his best friend, his life must be pretty messed up; . . . "
p. 10 "He may not remember. . . ., but he knew he hated mean kids."
p. 12 He thinks "crazy gods," and gets a piercing pain behind his eyes.  "He felt like he'd gotten close to something important -- something he should know about. He also got the unmistakable feeling that he was in danger."
p. 12-13  he wonders how he came to have the gold coin and how he knew he was going to need it soon.

p. 14 Leo asks, "you think you just appeared here this morning, and we've all got fake memories of you? "  "A little voice in Jason's head said, That's exactly what I think.
p. 15  When Coach Hedge affirms that Jason doesn't belong there, Jason "was so relieved he almost wanted to cry. At least he wasn't going insane."

  

Using MY Access to Improve Your Writing


When you log into MY Access to revise your work,  on the page with the graph "Snapshot Report,"  look to the right of the page for the message center.  After an assignment has been graded by the teacher, there will probably be a message there for you.  Click on it.

Read the message, and look down at the copy of your own writing to see if there are any embedded comments.  They will show up as words  in different colors.   When you click on them, you will see the embedded message about that part of the paragraph or essay. 

Composition Book Check #2

Here's what you need to have.
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Composition Book Entries:
1. iWrite -- Family   September 13/14, 2012
What does “family” mean to you? Are there people in your life that you’re not related to that you consider family? Describe why or why not.  
2.  iWrite   Pet Peeves  -- September 17/18, 2012 
What drives you crazy? Is there something that a friend, relative, or classmate (or someone else) does that really aggravates you? What is it? Why do you think it bugs you so much?
(2b.  A1-A4)  iWrite: "What a Character Does"  9/19/12
  Write about what you have learned about   one of the characters from 
     what he or she does.  This is what you've talked with your partner about.) 
3. Setting chart filled in with settings from The Outsiders.
4.  iWrite: Once Upon a Time  September 25   / 26
   Write out one of your favorite fairy tales -- as you would tell it to your children.  

5.  Taped-in half-sheet for iWrite: Capitalization and Punctuation
6.  Narrative Plot Structure diagrams for "The Three Bears" and The Outsiders.
7.  iWrite:   One Family Member   September 27 or 28, 2012
Prompt: Tell me about a member of your family. Only positives today, so pick someone you think highly of. Describe the person as best you can. You may include physical description, character description, examples of behavior, good deeds, etc.
8.  iWrite:    Another Person in My Family 10-1    Prompt: Describe a member of your family in a paragraph.  This must be a different one than you described last time. Concentrate on one main idea from your character web for that person.
9.  Hamburger and Rubric Chart  -- Rubric for writing a paragraph.
10.  iWrite: Comparing and Contrasting 10-3 (with Venn Diagram)
     Write comparing or contrasting those  two different family members you've already written about. 
11.  iWrite: Release 10-5
Prompt: Write about your week. How’s it been? Stressful? Joyous? Painful? Romantic?
AND/OR Write about whatever you want today!
 
12.    iWrite: Window/Mirror  October 9/10
Is the character in your novel you’re learning about more of a mirror or more of a window to you? (Is the character a lot like you -- a mirror? How?  Or is reading about this character more like looking at a different type of person through a window?)

  • Are you keeping up your character chart?  
  • What about your our setting chart?  
  • Are you still working in your  plot diagram? 

Here is what the composition book check-sheet looks like:

Composition Book Check     Term 1, Check 2
(See the class blog for complete prompts.)
_____1. What does “family” mean to you?
_____2. Pet Peeves
_____3. Setting Chart
_____4. Write out a fairy tale.
_____5. Taped-in worksheet for capitalization and punctuation.
_____6.  Narrative plot structure diagrams for
                  “The Three Bears”
                  and The Outsiders
_____7. One Family Member
_____8.  Another Family Member
_____9. Hamburger and rubric chart
_____10. Comparing and Contrasting (Venn diagram and paragraph)
_____11. Release (your week or any topic)
_____12. Window or Mirror on a Character
________Total/60 points

Corrected by ___________________________
                           (first and last, legible)

You will check another student's work, not your own.
Sample Grades:
0= nothing written, or just the heading written
1=heading written and one or two sentences
3=heading plus three or four sentences
5=correct heading plus at least seven thoughtful sentences
*Remember:  You aren't checking for spelling or other conventions for the points.   You just need to be able to read it.  
 


Extra Credit -- The Road Not Taken



James Bourret Fine Art Photography
The Road Not Taken 
                                         by Robert Frost  


TWO roads diverged in a yellow wood,
And sorry I could not travel both
And be one traveler, long I stood
And looked down one as far as I could
To where it bent in the undergrowth;        5
Then took the other, as just as fair,
And having perhaps the better claim,
Because it was grassy and wanted wear;
Though as for that the passing there
Had worn them really about the same,        10
And both that morning equally lay
In leaves no step had trodden black.
Oh, I kept the first for another day!
Yet knowing how way leads on to way,
I doubted if I should ever come back.        15
I shall be telling this with a sigh
Somewhere ages and ages hence:
Two roads diverged in a wood, and I—
I took the one less traveled by,
And that has made all the difference.


1 extra credit point per line
Note on extra credit:  Extra Credit Points are not added onto your grade unless you have completed all major assignments and tests.