Showing posts with label commas. Show all posts
Showing posts with label commas. Show all posts

Tuesday, November 19, 2013

Adjectives: Equal (Coordinate) or Not?


And standing in the middle of the opening was a hulking, terrifying figure.
Deltora Quest: Forests of Silence by Emily Rodda, p. 113

Lief and Barda froze as the hollow, echoing voice rang out.
Deltora Quest: Forests of Silence by Emily Rodda, p. 113

Overjoyed, Lief saw that ideed the wound was repairing itself.  Already, it was just a raw, red scar.  And as he watched the scar itself began to fade, till it was nothing but a thin white line.
Deltora Quest: Forests of Silence by Emily Rodda, p. 125

. . . the last few golden drops dripped into it.
Deltora Quest: Forests of Silence by Emily Rodda, p. 126

How can I tell whether to add the comma?

  • Can you reverse the order of the adjectives -- and it still sounds right?
  • Can you replace the comma with "and" -- and it still sounds right? 



Tuesday, October 22, 2013

CSI Answers for November 5: Commas and Adjectives



Conventions in Sentences Investigation 

Commas?  Where do commas belong in this sentence? Copy this sentence, adding two commas where they belong.

Label it "C.S.I." with today's date: 
Correct answer: 

 Cool (, ) deep (, )  dark blue water flowed through the 

rough limestone rocks in the gorge.  

You could replace the commas with "and."  
There is not a comma between dark and blue because dark is describing what sort of blue. 
There is not a comma between rough and limestone because rough is describing what sort of limestone it is. 




Tuesday, June 4, 2013